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I escape electrocution
With a match box and curiosity
Of a gas leak.
Seeping silent,
Creeping invisibility.
Like you.
Scented, swaying
Until the explosion.
The sensation
(Of death).
I whisper outside your window
(flaming)
I give a helping of laughter
To the roar
Of the billowing smoke.
I let you take the blame,
An accident,
An unmeant suicide of
The ashes still embers
And the gas thinning
But still a danger.
(flick and)
They fall into the silent murder,
(Ka- boom).
This was your match
(scratch) box,
Explosive.
©2005-2009 ~myownnightmare
:iconmyownnightmare:

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a poem.

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:iconkelecheney:
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covered by the dark, silent as the night, the rogue will come closer and take your life. Now bitten it has become a VampyreRogue, only daylight can save you!
:iconmyownnightmare:
thanks

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:skullbones: :heart: :skullbones:
im choking down the air you all so willingly breathe,
and clinging to what you so quickly leave,
your giving up what i so dearly need
:blackrose:
:iconnarcanity:
this is really cool.. i love the way you ended it..
though for some reason its meaning escapes me..

but i still like it..

:+fav: <-- (insta fav)

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In the end, after the whole catastrophic struggle, he was hit by a runaway bus.
Comedic. It's funny. Death is funny.
:iconmyownnightmare:
glad ya liked it. i'll explain the meaning to you the next time we talk... if i can. hah.
thank you.

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:skullbones: :heart: :skullbones:
im choking down the air you all so willingly breathe,
and clinging to what you so quickly leave,
your giving up what i so dearly need
:blackrose:
:iconlil-nene-chan:
I liked it... The short, sweet, and to the point style emphasizes the feelings a lot better than if it were done standard. Really like the detail and the flow. Awesome, 10/10 on MY scale! ^_^

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"Kinky is using a feather... Being perverse is using the whole DAMN chicken!!!"

-Me
:iconmyownnightmare:
thanks.. this was an intersting one for me.. it's not really like the rest of my stuff. again, thank you!

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:skullbones: :heart: :skullbones:
im choking down the air you all so willingly breathe,
and clinging to what you so quickly leave,
your giving up what i so dearly need
:blackrose:

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